tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post8712674805368736995..comments2023-10-06T12:25:21.643-04:00Comments on Kerri Cuevas: Week Two: I Love Dark Ya-Flash FictionKerri Cuevhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post-38610885315615747362011-11-17T09:44:52.560-05:002011-11-17T09:44:52.560-05:00Hey well done. Just flipping the picture was cleve...Hey well done. Just flipping the picture was clever, let alone the rest - I, too, thought you wrote a fab last line and that is so important.Claire Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16576410137759875223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post-6996850397985044302011-11-10T22:03:14.139-05:002011-11-10T22:03:14.139-05:00Like others have said--great idea to flip the pict...Like others have said--great idea to flip the picture to inspire yourself! Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post-76706341337674792452011-11-09T17:26:36.549-05:002011-11-09T17:26:36.549-05:00Flipping the photo was a great idea. The last lin...Flipping the photo was a great idea. The last line is terrific!M.J. Fifieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15626475963328519693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post-29500143176719190722011-11-09T16:07:25.620-05:002011-11-09T16:07:25.620-05:00What a great idea! Flipping it over - awesome. Gre...What a great idea! Flipping it over - awesome. Great piece!<br />- http://pensuasion.blogspot.com/S. L. Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06514651403542719387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post-9548779735589534852011-11-09T13:21:21.658-05:002011-11-09T13:21:21.658-05:00I love surprise endings. Great job with the flippe...I love surprise endings. Great job with the flipped photo!Brindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09809660700359597836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post-13326022744419280612011-11-09T13:16:48.326-05:002011-11-09T13:16:48.326-05:00Brilliant idea to turn the photo upside down!Brilliant idea to turn the photo upside down!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post-21625173276357584002011-11-09T12:15:10.963-05:002011-11-09T12:15:10.963-05:00Flipping the picture upside down was a stroke of g...Flipping the picture upside down was a stroke of genius. Also, the ending flipping on the bad guy was a nice touch.Emily R. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03892444969625637064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post-59065599460266571732011-11-09T11:49:03.921-05:002011-11-09T11:49:03.921-05:00I love how you flipped it. It wasn't working f...I love how you flipped it. It wasn't working for you and you made it work. That's awesome. What I loved most about the story was that you made the girl strong and powerful. The line: "You will only make me feel inferior if I allow it and news flash, I won’t allow it!” had me doing a little fist pump.Theresahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10957479478228268972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269226245086104286.post-26433608904095752842011-11-09T10:49:29.738-05:002011-11-09T10:49:29.738-05:00Flipping it upside-down was a great idea! I love a...Flipping it upside-down was a great idea! I love all of this, but especially the last line.Becky Mahoneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891727235981320025noreply@blogger.com